I was hired to make this painting as a birthday gift. This little girl is my friend's nice... really cute girl and I had a lot of fun painting her...

With this new painting I wish to get in the Ballistic Publishing new book. Call for entries ends march 24th 2008. But to make it I really need some help!!! So, I'd really appreciate if you guys could please take some minutes to take a look and criticize. Any comments are very welcome...

EDIT: Some adjustments... I put some stars in the background, changed her right hand, painted some lights, etc...